Comic 2.1
Author Notes:
I still have a long way to go this chapter, so no weekly postings this time. Just whenever I finish each page, I suppose. I know this is a horrible idea, I just can't hold onto it anymore. lmao
My plan is to complete the pages I'm confident in while at the same time working through the dialogue for the later half (with the help of those that volunteered to critique). So I have a feeling it's going to be very slow this chapter. >.>
Thank you for being so patient! Hope the wait will be worth it! And I hope you enjoy this very Dom-centric chapter. XD <3
(Btw for anyone that's curious what the text/email says: link lmao XD)
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This page features cameo ads from:
Stilldown
Cressidia
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If you want to cameo your own fake brands/ads, feel free to post 'em here!
Link
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PS I am so glad to see your comic back up again
Thank you!!
It returns! Welcome back, Cass! XD
Looks like Dom had a girlfriend...now the question is...what all went down?
Judging from Dom's reaction to her photo, I'm guessing it wasn't good.
Whatever happened, it definitely was not good. ;.;
Gotta love those spam emails that pull you out of your serene moment on the subway. XD Hmmm, I'm gonna be a judge-y person here and say that gal looks like trouble (look, it's the expression you drew on her face - there are layers behind those eyes, and one of those layers says "I expect a lot.").
They really gotta do something about those pesky spam emails!
Haha!! I can't say anything of course, but that's a pretty good judgement! :B
(I have so much to catch up on! Can't wait to dive into what I missed with yours! Especially since I've been craving Skyrim really bad again. Haha!)
Or perhaps... he just can't yet bring himself to do it...?
kudos for drawing a subway cabin, those are harddd
stand up and RUN!
Amazing page and poor Dom! ;_; Change that wallpaper my man, you don't need that kind of pain every time you check the time.
Definitely! ;.; Thank you!
Ahh, Dom... been there before my brotha. *pat pat*
That subway interior shot though, man... looks very clean and impressive. Digging the design of the ex too.
Lol, I love your "yolo" outlook on posting pages. Reminds me of me in my younger days. Looking forward to seeing how this chapter plays out. :)
Lol! I have no patience when it comes to building buffers, so YOLO it is! XD My excitement gets too overwhelming! Lol
1. jealous that dom got the train where the windows aren't weirdly clouded over so you can't just look outside and chill
2. jealous of enirehtak's proximity to dom's lush chest hair
oh no now i'm giving away too much of myself3. i love the whole page but especially dom's expression in panel 8
4. somebody need to call patrol about that suspicious bag left behind in panel 1
2. Oh my God, SAME. lmfao 🤤
3. Thank you!
4. Lol!!
Is that Dom's former girlfriend? She's definitely good looking, but there's probably a fair reason for them not being together anymore.
Annnnyway...onto the important stuff...the advertisements on in the subway car! :D Very nicely done, I think Dom needs "tubeescape", it sounds relevant to his current location. Also, as previously mentioned, I love the expressions and body language from panel to panel, you really have a knack for it. :)
Glad to see you posting again!
Yep! Indeed, by the look of his face it definitely did not end well.
Haha! Same for the Furnace Filters by Stilldown behind him. Could use a bit of both. XD
Aww! Thank you so much!! It means a lot to me!! ^^